Improved SUMMARY / DESCRIPTION

for DevilutionX, GPXLab, Maelstrom

games-action/maelstrom/maelstrom-3.0.6.recipe

@@ -4,19 +4,19 @@ belt -- suddenly your best friend thrusts towards you and fires, directly at \
 your cockpit. You raise your shields just in time, and the battle is joined.
 
 The deadliest stretch of space known to mankind has just gotten deadlier.
-Everywhere massive asteroids jostle for a chance to crush your ship, and deadly
-shinobi fighter patrols pursue you across the asteroid belt. But the deadliest
-of them all is your sister ship, assigned to you on patrol. The pilot, trained
-by your own Navy, battle hardened by months in the Maelstrom, is equipped with
-a twin of your own ship and intimate knowledge of your tactics.
+Everywhere massive asteroids jostle for a chance to crush your ship, and \
+deadly shinobi fighter patrols pursue you across the asteroid belt. But the \
+deadliest of them all is your sister ship, assigned to you on patrol. The \
+pilot, trained by your own Navy, battle hardened by months in the Maelstrom, \
+is equipped with a twin of your own ship and intimate knowledge of your tactics.
 
-The lovely Stratocaster R&R facility never sounded so good, but as you fire
-full thrusters to dodge the latest barrage you begin to think you'll never get
-home..."
+The lovely Stratocaster R&R facility never sounded so good, but as you fire \
+full thrusters to dodge the latest barrage you begin to think you'll never \
+get home..."
 HOMEPAGE="http://www.libsdl.org/projects/Maelstrom"
 COPYRIGHT="1996-2005 Sam Lantinga"
 LICENSE="GNU GPL v2"
-REVISION="4"
+REVISION="5"
 SOURCE_URI="http://www.libsdl.org/projects/Maelstrom/src/Maelstrom-$portVersion.tar.gz"
 CHECKSUM_SHA256="e7983c2c7376cdcca1944db1706d92aedd529638cf13358c88a60df982ba7b46"
 SOURCE_DIR="Maelstrom-$portVersion"

games-rpg/devilutionx/devilutionx-1.0.0.recipe

@@ -1,11 +1,13 @@
-SUMMARY="Diablo build for modern operating systems"
-DESCRIPTION="This new effort is an open-source re-implementation of \
-Blizzard's Diablo game from 1996 while now working on Linux and other \
-operating systems nicely."
+SUMMARY="An open-source reconstruction of Diablo"
+DESCRIPTION="DevilutionX is a new effort of an open-source re-implementation \
+of Blizzard's Diablo game from 1996.
+
+To play, you'll need the file 'diabdat.mpq' from the original Diablo CD.
+Visit the homepage for more info, a FAQ, controller mappings, etc."
 HOMEPAGE="https://github.com/diasurgical/devilutionX"
 COPYRIGHT="2018 GalaXyHaXz"
 LICENSE="Public Domain"
-REVISION="1"
+REVISION="2"
 SOURCE_URI="https://github.com/diasurgical/devilutionX/archive/$portVersion.zip"
 CHECKSUM_SHA256="1a8fa6853809e6cdc61c82f5aa118c1447b21667b750a17b04939e75e4e3034c"
 SOURCE_DIR="devilutionX-$portVersion"

sci-geosciences/gpxlab/gpxlab-0.7.0.recipe

@@ -1,10 +1,22 @@
-SUMMARY="Program to show and manipulate GPS tracks"
+SUMMARY="A program to show and manipulate GPS tracks"
 DESCRIPTION="GPXLab is an application to display and manage GPS tracks \
-previously recorded with a GPS tracker."
-HOMEPAGE="https://bourgeoislab.wordpress.com/gpxlab/"
+previously recorded with a GPS tracker.
+
+Features & Functions
+
+* Open GPX (v1.0 or v1.1), NMEA and SpoQ files
+* Combine several tracks into one single GPX file
+* Rearrange the tracks (move/add/delete)
+* Modify the meta data of the GPX file and of any tracks inside the file
+* Get altitude data from the SRTM database
+* Show statistical information about the summarized tracks or a single track
+* Show a map of all tracks
+* Show an altitude and a speed diagram
+* Show a list of all track points"
+HOMEPAGE="https://github.com/BourgeoisLab/GPXLab"
 COPYRIGHT="2014-2020 Frédéric Bourgeois"
 LICENSE="GNU GPL v3"
-REVISION="1"
+REVISION="2"
 SOURCE_URI="https://github.com/BourgeoisLab/GPXLab/archive/v$portVersion.tar.gz"
 CHECKSUM_SHA256="cb9fbcde4688c388b781c90b7c48a60a76c5d5bed14e5040e55a13a3f810aa0e"
 SOURCE_FILENAME="GPXLab-$portVersion.tar.gz"